Inspirational Identity Systems

Here are some identity systems that I found to be rather impressive:

Final Logo Designs (Kind of)

So here are the final logos that I came up with (the first is the one I settled on, and the second is just something I experimented with). Anyways, seeing how critique went, it looks like I still need some work. Any suggestions or comments would be greatly appreciated.

2 Refined Logos

Alright everyone, I've gotten mixed reviews on both of these designs...leaving me in an awkward position because I can't make two logos. With that being the case, any suggestions are more than welcome.

* Note: The last two pictures are all designs belonging to the same series. 

5 Refined Roughs